your characters don't feel too committed. the music worked really well. focus more on character work, i'd say.
your characters don't feel too committed. the music worked really well. focus more on character work, i'd say.
They don't feel too committed, but you didn't explain on 'how' or 'why' (which is what I like to hear if someone is gonna shoot a critique). So that only feels like a weak stab at my work. So, elaborate.
thought u left to be 'cool' on 'sound' 'cloud'
you don't get paid to think
some nice violin would make this beat killer man. or at least some kind of harmony. but im feelin violin.
rip the greatest soup of all time
just be a rapper
thats the plan doh!
The lyrics sounded really muffled. Is it the mic? Didn't mind the lyrics, just work on a smoother flow and definitely mixing.
This was drunkenly recorded in one take between the three of us with a single mic being passed back and forth at 4:30 am after an epic party at my house.
I've never done any mixing, but at some point we will certainly be recording this with greater quality. Just wanted to get the first take out there for some reason.
...maybe cuz I've never recorded any music before.
Haha. Ill post an update when we get this song done a little better so you can understand what we have in mind. It'll sound great, I'm sure.
Thanks for the comment.
loops fine
poo poo head
I don't think it very accurately portrays a gay orgy between a group of elderly men, but it's good nonetheless!
Oh, it works on SO many levels
Every time I hear this;
I laugh my ass off.
Stunning
There is nothing to improve on. This was amazing, and should be featured. I am for sure downloading.
And the chances of this being featured? Almost zero.
This song has gone through the new submissions list with 9 votes and 24 listens. Unless I advertise this song, I doubt this will get any more...
AND IS IF THAT BUT SO OKAY
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